First Response to "Houdini's Box"

This was a good read cause I didn't know much about Houdini. I knew OF him, but didn't know much about him other than he is a magician. I didn't think the first part they wrote about the girl and her hide-n-seek "issues" were really that relevant to Houdini and I don't think they should've started the essay off with that or even put it into the essay.